"Terribly written. Bad grammar. Does no one edit these books. Definitely not ready to be published. Had to improve the story just so my toddler would understand. Absolutely badly written." simone Joseph said.
"Poorly written. I had to change the words so it can make sense!! Do not waste your time on this book." Amazon Customer said.
"In the first 3 pages of the book the sweet little girl meets a witch who turns her into a doll. Aykm?! That is disturbing to a 4 year old. Now I know to screen the kindle books before I read them to my child." D. Penrod said.
"I gave it two starts because my son enjoyed it, but it was really poorly written. There were a lot of grammatical errors; so many, in fact, that some sentences didn't even make sense and I made it a point to correct the sentences so my son wouldn't repeat the horrendous grammar. I imagine that the story was probably just poorly translated from another language." Amazon Customer said.
"This book had multiple grammatical and spelling errors. The errors were so frequent, it was difficult to read. The author definitely should have had this proofread." Sjmcknz said.
"Cute story and my five year-old liked it but I found it difficult to read because of the choice of words." tgleaf said.
"I had to constantly rearrange the words so they made sense! The author has obviously never written a book before, and desperately needs an editor" Amazon Customer said.
"I'm not sure what happened but all of a sudden it becomes very hard to follow. It is as if it were translated from another language and there are several glaring typo's. Not what I would recommend for young readers. The premise is a little cheesy, but a decent story in concept." Amazon Customer said.